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Hi To be honest I have never come across work written in such style.Completely unconventional,interesting,meaningful........fantastic idea about change. The way the poem unfolded telling a story was r

Hi This poem I guess follows the theme of the human spirit and does that with clear examples. Even the tallest Mountains crumble; Beneath the travelers feet; A magnified image ...

This was some very short,very effective and very meaningful poem that makes the message very clear. Excellent use of the highly creative metaphor.The helplessness against stopping time from causing us

Hi This poem had a nice and understandable message.The idea was also presented in simple words. Stanza 1: Happiness, soul and the heart of me. This line seems a bit ...

Anyone who goes through tough and socially insecure times in life would completely understand what you mean. The emotional struggle of the narrator was completely sincere and did not give ...

Hi This poem was a really simple way of showing how different people live their sorrowful lives. You gave a great insight into households of different types with quite similar ...

Hi Great poem with lovely violent images but needs some simplification. Honestly,here is something that I could really not understand: Have the amazingly well constructed horrific images been added ju

Hi This was a great poem with a great message.Here is what might possibly help you improve this poem: If possible,try and cut back on the number of examples.Two or ...

This poem is not bad at does look like you have put in quite a lot of effort into this. The idea of the poem is unique and using the ...

This poem has a good idea behind it but it seemed to lack a little in effort. Stanza 1: The lines have been broken in an uneven manner and the ...

This was just simply fantastic.Such a great idea was brought out in just a few thoughts so simply and effectively. It really tells us how we people have been accepted ...

The second and third haikus have a clear cut meaning though the first one leaves many guesses. The Abyss Below The Pool of Water Reflects; A Sky With no Stars ...

The idea of this poem was fantastic and so was the way you brought it out. The concept of people being compared to raindrops really makes us feel weak and ...

Mahamaya-The Great Illusionist From silent darkness a melodious voice plays To the tune of this melody, the smitten man sways He tries hard to search, search for the sound Try ...

Hi This was a really great piece.Really simple and understandable to the reader. I want to discover her so I am not alone. What makes this place her instead of ...